Nick Lutz decided to get a red marker out and critique the four-page note before sending it back to his former lover.
He told Newsbeat: "We started dating in February of last year and dated for about eight months.
"Four months in she started hiding her phone and I heard she had code names for guys in her contacts list."
Nick who studies at the University of Central Florida, says he received the apology, shortly after calling time on the relationship.
He starts off by saying the introduction is too long and that there's lots of repetition.